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I am sure that if children want to go to English Camp, their parents will think very seriously which English camp is the best. They will mostly care on where do their children stay and the location of it. Also, they will think about what experience can their children get. There are three examples of English Camp. They are "Camp Big Apple", "Ranch West Camp", and "Head Start Splash". They all may have benefits, but to satisfy parents, they should send their child to "Ranch West Camp".
Those three camps seem very similar with each other. They all use several weeks to let the students to learn English. Also, they employes teachers with good skill. The camps lead the students to experience many different cultures and have a good memory. Although, these camps are similar, "Ranch West Camp" is the best choice.
When I have a choice to choose which camp I will go, I would like to choose "Ranch West Camp". The reason why I would choose it is because I think the place where I stay is very important. Contrasted with "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", the place I'm going to stay when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much better. When I go to the "Camp Big Apple", I will stay in a dormitory. That will bring me many problems. They are problems with communicating, because I am going to use a same room with the children from other countries. For the "Head Start Splash", staying in a small apartment with family is not a good idea. It is such a small place to live for 5weeks. On the other hand, homestaying, which I am going to do when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much safer than others.
The location of the place I'm going to stay is also important. The imformation about "Camp Big Apple" does not tell me the location of it. However, "Ranch West Camp" exactly tells me that the location is rural Canada. Even though "Head Start Splash" gives me that the location is Cebu Philippines, I would not like to go there. In Phlippine, many people use English, but they still have their own language. But, Canada is the native English country. This could affect me very much to learn English easier and faster.
The experience which I can make in the camp is very important as well as the location of the camp. Compared to "Camp Big Apple", "Head Start Splash", and "Ranch West Camp", I can make various experience. Despite of the similarity of the experience, I think I will make more memory when I go to "Ranch West Camp". It is because there are more activities I like in the camp. For example, I like hoseback riding, river rafting, hiking, canoeing, and mountain biking. I really like these because I did not have any chance to try most of these. I don't like the activities in other camps. Memory of trips to local museums, tickets to Broadway shows, and fishing are easy to make even though I don't go to those camps.
In conclusion, considering all above, the three reasons for the homestay, location, and the experience, I would like to choose the "Ranch West Camp". I think homestaying will make me comfortable, and also safe. As you know, the best way to learn speaking English is living in native English Country, for example, Canada. Alike the other camps, I can make many experiences, but there are more activity I would like to do, if I go to "Ranch West Camp". Despite many other benefits for "Big Apple Camp", and "Head Start Splash", I would like to go to "Ranch West Camp".
Really good use of the transition words. We could work a little on some grammar mistakes but you did a really good job!
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