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    If children want to go to an English Camp, their parent will think very seriously about the best English Camp to go. They will mostly care an locataion their children will stay and the place to study. Also, they will think about what experiences tehir children could earn during the camp. There are three examples of English Camps. THey are "Camp Big Apple", "Ranch West Camp", and "Head Start Splash". They all have benefits, but to satisfy parents and children, they should send their children to Ranch West Camp.

    The reason why I would choose it is because I think the place where I stay is very important. Contrasted with "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", the place I'm going to stay when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much better. When I go to "Camp Big Apple", I will stay in a dormitory. That will bring many conflicts, such as communicating, because I am going to use a same room with children from all over the world. For "Head Start Splash", staying in a small apartment with our family is not a good idea. It is such a small place to live for 5weeks. On the other hand, homestaying, which I am going to do when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much safer than others, becuase in the home-stay situation will be protected from the owner of the home, and the home-stay environment is safer.

    The location of the place I am going to study is also important. The information about "Camp Big Apple" does not tell me the location of it. Howeer, "Ranch West Camp" exactly tells me what the location is which is in rural Canada. Even though "Head Start Splash" tells me that the location is Cebu Phillipines, I would not like to go there. In Phillipines many people use English, but they still have their own language. However  Canadains speak native English. This could affect me very much to learn English easier and faster.

    The experience which I can make in the camp is very important as well as the location of the camp. Contrasted to "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", I cam make various experiences at "Ranch West Camp". Despite the similarity of the experiences, I think I will make more memories when I go to "Ranch West Camp". It is because there are more activities I like in this camp. For example, I like horse back riding, river rafting, hiking, canoeing, and mountain biking. I really like these becuase I did not have any chance to try most of these. I don't like the activities in other camps. Memeries of trips to local museums, teckets to Broadway shows, and fishing is  easy to make.

    In conclustion, considering all the above, the three reasons for homestay situation, location, and the experience, I would like to choose "Ranch West Camp". I think homestaying will make me comfortable, and also safe. As you know, the best way to learn English is living in a native English countires such as Canada. Alike the other camps, I cam make many experiences, but there are more activities I would like to do, if I go to "Ranch West Camp". Those three camps seem very similar with each other. They all use several weeks to let the students to learsn Englsih. Also, they employ teachers with good skills. The camps lead the students to experience many differnet cultures and have a good memories. Although these camps are similar, "Ranch West Camp" is the best choice.