Also she is a great actress. So I think, she is good to be my favorite actress!!
Tuesday, August 16, 2011
Emma Watson!!
Also she is a great actress. So I think, she is good to be my favorite actress!!
Skill post 3
Editing and Proofreading
If children want to go to an English Camp, their parent will think very seriously about the best English Camp to go. They will mostly care an locataion their children will stay and the place to study. Also, they will think about what experiences tehir children could earn during the camp. There are three examples of English Camps. THey are "Camp Big Apple", "Ranch West Camp", and "Head Start Splash". They all have benefits, but to satisfy parents and children, they should send their children to Ranch West Camp.
The reason why I would choose it is because I think the place where I stay is very important. Contrasted with "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", the place I'm going to stay when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much better. When I go to "Camp Big Apple", I will stay in a dormitory. That will bring many conflicts, such as communicating, because I am going to use a same room with children from all over the world. For "Head Start Splash", staying in a small apartment with our family is not a good idea. It is such a small place to live for 5weeks. On the other hand, homestaying, which I am going to do when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much safer than others, becuase in the home-stay situation will be protected from the owner of the home, and the home-stay environment is safer.
The location of the place I am going to study is also important. The information about "Camp Big Apple" does not tell me the location of it. Howeer, "Ranch West Camp" exactly tells me what the location is which is in rural Canada. Even though "Head Start Splash" tells me that the location is Cebu Phillipines, I would not like to go there. In Phillipines many people use English, but they still have their own language. However Canadains speak native English. This could affect me very much to learn English easier and faster.
The experience which I can make in the camp is very important as well as the location of the camp. Contrasted to "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", I cam make various experiences at "Ranch West Camp". Despite the similarity of the experiences, I think I will make more memories when I go to "Ranch West Camp". It is because there are more activities I like in this camp. For example, I like horse back riding, river rafting, hiking, canoeing, and mountain biking. I really like these becuase I did not have any chance to try most of these. I don't like the activities in other camps. Memeries of trips to local museums, teckets to Broadway shows, and fishing is easy to make.
In conclustion, considering all the above, the three reasons for homestay situation, location, and the experience, I would like to choose "Ranch West Camp". I think homestaying will make me comfortable, and also safe. As you know, the best way to learn English is living in a native English countires such as Canada. Alike the other camps, I cam make many experiences, but there are more activities I would like to do, if I go to "Ranch West Camp". Those three camps seem very similar with each other. They all use several weeks to let the students to learsn Englsih. Also, they employ teachers with good skills. The camps lead the students to experience many differnet cultures and have a good memories. Although these camps are similar, "Ranch West Camp" is the best choice.
If children want to go to an English Camp, their parent will think very seriously about the best English Camp to go. They will mostly care an locataion their children will stay and the place to study. Also, they will think about what experiences tehir children could earn during the camp. There are three examples of English Camps. THey are "Camp Big Apple", "Ranch West Camp", and "Head Start Splash". They all have benefits, but to satisfy parents and children, they should send their children to Ranch West Camp.
The reason why I would choose it is because I think the place where I stay is very important. Contrasted with "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", the place I'm going to stay when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much better. When I go to "Camp Big Apple", I will stay in a dormitory. That will bring many conflicts, such as communicating, because I am going to use a same room with children from all over the world. For "Head Start Splash", staying in a small apartment with our family is not a good idea. It is such a small place to live for 5weeks. On the other hand, homestaying, which I am going to do when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much safer than others, becuase in the home-stay situation will be protected from the owner of the home, and the home-stay environment is safer.
The location of the place I am going to study is also important. The information about "Camp Big Apple" does not tell me the location of it. Howeer, "Ranch West Camp" exactly tells me what the location is which is in rural Canada. Even though "Head Start Splash" tells me that the location is Cebu Phillipines, I would not like to go there. In Phillipines many people use English, but they still have their own language. However Canadains speak native English. This could affect me very much to learn English easier and faster.
The experience which I can make in the camp is very important as well as the location of the camp. Contrasted to "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", I cam make various experiences at "Ranch West Camp". Despite the similarity of the experiences, I think I will make more memories when I go to "Ranch West Camp". It is because there are more activities I like in this camp. For example, I like horse back riding, river rafting, hiking, canoeing, and mountain biking. I really like these becuase I did not have any chance to try most of these. I don't like the activities in other camps. Memeries of trips to local museums, teckets to Broadway shows, and fishing is easy to make.
In conclustion, considering all the above, the three reasons for homestay situation, location, and the experience, I would like to choose "Ranch West Camp". I think homestaying will make me comfortable, and also safe. As you know, the best way to learn English is living in a native English countires such as Canada. Alike the other camps, I cam make many experiences, but there are more activities I would like to do, if I go to "Ranch West Camp". Those three camps seem very similar with each other. They all use several weeks to let the students to learsn Englsih. Also, they employ teachers with good skills. The camps lead the students to experience many differnet cultures and have a good memories. Although these camps are similar, "Ranch West Camp" is the best choice.
Thursday, August 11, 2011
Even if you never heard that name, you will know who he is.
Many people saw the movie 'high school musical'! Right?
Lucas Grabeel was "Ryan"in that movie.
My friends tells me that Troy(Zac Efron) is much better than Lucas Grabeel.
But I don't agree with them. Lucas Grabeel is much better!
He's 173cm tall(I think he is quit short), and he was born in America(1984.11.23).
How about you guys?? I'm waiting for the comments!!
Skill Post 2
Summary
On March 11, 2011, and earthquake which happened in the cost of Japan, churmed up the farmland in the northern part of the country. Also, it caused th9.0 earthquake caused the explosion and the leaks of the radioactive gas. Moreover, the 22,000 people are dead or missing.In interviews,some current government officials denied the nuclear disaster.As the nuclear plant continues to release radiation, some seems to make potential health risks.
Paraphraze
-original
On March 11, 2011, an earthquake struck off the coast of Japan, churning up a devastating tsunami that swept over cities and farmland in the northern part of the country and set off warnings as far away the west coast of the United States and South America. Recorded as 9.0 on the Richter scale, it was the most powerful quake ever to hit the country.As the nation struggled with a rescue effort, it also faced the worst nuclear emergency since Chernobyl; explosions and leaks of radioactive gas took place in three reactors at the Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Station that suffered partial meltdowns, while spent fuel rods at another reactor overheated and caught fire, releasing radioactive material directly into the atmosphere. Japanese officials turned to increasingly desperate measures, as traces of radiation were found in Tokyo's water and in water pouring from the reactors into the ocean. A month after the quake, nuclear officials put the crisis in the same category of severity as the Chernobyl disaster. In May, Prime Minister Naoto Kan, who had been criticized for showing a lack of leadership, said Japan would abandon plans to build new nuclear reactors, saying his country needed to “start from scratch” in creating a new energy policy that should include greater reliance on renewable energy and conservation.
-paraphraze
On March11, 2011, an earthquake with 9.0 point, charmed up with the tsunamiand swept the cities and the farmland. It was the most powerful earthquake to hit Japan. Alsp, it caused a worse nuclear explosion scince Chernobyl. While the nuclear power plant spent fuel rods,they release the radioactive material directly into the atmosphere. In May, the Prime Minister, Naoto Kan, said Japan would no use the plan using and building the new nuclear power plants. They will create a new energy policy that should include greater reliance on renewable energy and conservation.
On March 11, 2011, and earthquake which happened in the cost of Japan, churmed up the farmland in the northern part of the country. Also, it caused th9.0 earthquake caused the explosion and the leaks of the radioactive gas. Moreover, the 22,000 people are dead or missing.In interviews,some current government officials denied the nuclear disaster.As the nuclear plant continues to release radiation, some seems to make potential health risks.
Paraphraze
-original
On March 11, 2011, an earthquake struck off the coast of Japan, churning up a devastating tsunami that swept over cities and farmland in the northern part of the country and set off warnings as far away the west coast of the United States and South America. Recorded as 9.0 on the Richter scale, it was the most powerful quake ever to hit the country.As the nation struggled with a rescue effort, it also faced the worst nuclear emergency since Chernobyl; explosions and leaks of radioactive gas took place in three reactors at the Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Station that suffered partial meltdowns, while spent fuel rods at another reactor overheated and caught fire, releasing radioactive material directly into the atmosphere. Japanese officials turned to increasingly desperate measures, as traces of radiation were found in Tokyo's water and in water pouring from the reactors into the ocean. A month after the quake, nuclear officials put the crisis in the same category of severity as the Chernobyl disaster. In May, Prime Minister Naoto Kan, who had been criticized for showing a lack of leadership, said Japan would abandon plans to build new nuclear reactors, saying his country needed to “start from scratch” in creating a new energy policy that should include greater reliance on renewable energy and conservation.
-paraphraze
On March11, 2011, an earthquake with 9.0 point, charmed up with the tsunamiand swept the cities and the farmland. It was the most powerful earthquake to hit Japan. Alsp, it caused a worse nuclear explosion scince Chernobyl. While the nuclear power plant spent fuel rods,they release the radioactive material directly into the atmosphere. In May, the Prime Minister, Naoto Kan, said Japan would no use the plan using and building the new nuclear power plants. They will create a new energy policy that should include greater reliance on renewable energy and conservation.
Tuesday, August 9, 2011
Skill Post 2-paraphraze from the handout
Bushido: The Way of the Warrior
(Original)
In the Siege of Tottori castle in 1581, the defenders were surrounded for over 200days. They had run out of food, eaten their horses, and weere forced to eat grass. The siege ended when the castle's master, Tsuneie, agreed to commit suicide iin exchange for food for the people in the caslte.
(Paraphraze)
In 1581. while samurais were fighting with their enemy, they were seiged in Tottori castle for 200 days. They were running out of foods. So they had to eat gras, and the horses. So the master of the castle commit suicide to end the seige and exchanage food for the people in the castle.
(Original)
In the Siege of Tottori castle in 1581, the defenders were surrounded for over 200days. They had run out of food, eaten their horses, and weere forced to eat grass. The siege ended when the castle's master, Tsuneie, agreed to commit suicide iin exchange for food for the people in the caslte.
(Paraphraze)
In 1581. while samurais were fighting with their enemy, they were seiged in Tottori castle for 200 days. They were running out of foods. So they had to eat gras, and the horses. So the master of the castle commit suicide to end the seige and exchanage food for the people in the castle.
Skill Post 2 -from the handout
summary
Last Days of the Samurai
Traditionally, Sumurai had special position in Japanese society. Japanese peopole believed that only people born of Samuri blood can fight well. But this beleif began to change. Since the government in Japan decided the modernization, the government no longer needed the Samurai. They began to not paid any salary and fored to serve in the modern army with common people. So finally iin 1877, great Satsuma rebellion occured. However, it was defeated by a modern amry, and this broke the belief.
paraphraze
Bushido: The Way of the Warrior
(Original)
In the Siege of Tottori castle in 1581, the defenders were surrounded for over 200days. They had run out of food, eaten their horses, and weere forced to eat grass. The siege ended when the castle's master, Tsuneie, agreed to commit suicide iin exchange for food for the people in the caslte.
(Paraphraze)
In 1581. while samurais were fighting with their enemy, they were seiged in Tottori castle for 200 days. They were running out of foods. So they had to eat gras, and the horses. So the master of the castle commit suicide to end the seige and exchanage food for the people in the castle.
Last Days of the Samurai
Traditionally, Sumurai had special position in Japanese society. Japanese peopole believed that only people born of Samuri blood can fight well. But this beleif began to change. Since the government in Japan decided the modernization, the government no longer needed the Samurai. They began to not paid any salary and fored to serve in the modern army with common people. So finally iin 1877, great Satsuma rebellion occured. However, it was defeated by a modern amry, and this broke the belief.
paraphraze
Bushido: The Way of the Warrior
(Original)
In the Siege of Tottori castle in 1581, the defenders were surrounded for over 200days. They had run out of food, eaten their horses, and weere forced to eat grass. The siege ended when the castle's master, Tsuneie, agreed to commit suicide iin exchange for food for the people in the caslte.
(Paraphraze)
In 1581. while samurais were fighting with their enemy, they were seiged in Tottori castle for 200 days. They were running out of foods. So they had to eat gras, and the horses. So the master of the castle commit suicide to end the seige and exchanage food for the people in the castle.
Sunday, August 7, 2011
Put your HANDS UP!!
2pm is one of my favorite singer group.
I like the song 'hands up' best. You may have seen the performance of some teachers who sang and danced 'Hands up" at dance party. Even though I like 2pm, I think the perfomance of teachers were better. The Music Video only shows us the 2pm dancing and singing, but at dance party, everyone cheered. It was a great scene to watch. I hope the party at next week will be great as the last time!
Thursday, August 4, 2011
What the world eats???
You may wonder, what my family have eaten for this dinner. This is the picture of my family. Can you see two adults in th back, and two boys who is sitting in the chair? Those are my family. I am not there, because my work was to take a picture. I'll tell you, how our family's dinner starts. First, I can smell my mom preparing yummy food. Especially, when I smell the pizza, I run toward the kitchen right away! I'm very satisfying with my dinner today, because there was my favorite food, pizza. Then, when my mom's preparing is finished, she calls my dad , my two brothers, and me. Soon, there are five people, including mom, are sitting in the chairs to start our dinner. So the dinner starts!
If you visit my house during dinner, you will be very suprised. The table is big, and a lot of plates are on it. Especially in weekends, my mom prepares great dinner. All of the food I like are on the table. My father began to drink coke, and so as my brothers and me. Instead, my mom drinks juice. Sometimes, I drink orange juice, but it's not on the picture. After eating pizza, Lay's chip, meet, and chicken, my family begins to eat tomatoes, grapes, vegetables. Usually, my mom likes to eat vegetables more than meets. After eating all of the foods are done, I drink 2 cups of milk. That's because my mom keep saying to me that if I eat only meets, I will not be tall when I grow up.
So anyway, these are the foods mostly my family eats. They are pizza, Lay's chip, meet, and chicken! Actually, I eat these more than fruits, or vegetables. But I also eat great amount of vegetables. But don't think I as PIG!! Because I am from United States, I don't really know about other countries' foods. Would you like to tell me about other countries' food? Thanks, let's start a trip thorugh the world's food!
You may wonder, what my family have eaten for this dinner. This is the picture of my family. Can you see two adults in th back, and two boys who is sitting in the chair? Those are my family. I am not there, because my work was to take a picture. I'll tell you, how our family's dinner starts. First, I can smell my mom preparing yummy food. Especially, when I smell the pizza, I run toward the kitchen right away! I'm very satisfying with my dinner today, because there was my favorite food, pizza. Then, when my mom's preparing is finished, she calls my dad , my two brothers, and me. Soon, there are five people, including mom, are sitting in the chairs to start our dinner. So the dinner starts!
If you visit my house during dinner, you will be very suprised. The table is big, and a lot of plates are on it. Especially in weekends, my mom prepares great dinner. All of the food I like are on the table. My father began to drink coke, and so as my brothers and me. Instead, my mom drinks juice. Sometimes, I drink orange juice, but it's not on the picture. After eating pizza, Lay's chip, meet, and chicken, my family begins to eat tomatoes, grapes, vegetables. Usually, my mom likes to eat vegetables more than meets. After eating all of the foods are done, I drink 2 cups of milk. That's because my mom keep saying to me that if I eat only meets, I will not be tall when I grow up.
So anyway, these are the foods mostly my family eats. They are pizza, Lay's chip, meet, and chicken! Actually, I eat these more than fruits, or vegetables. But I also eat great amount of vegetables. But don't think I as PIG!! Because I am from United States, I don't really know about other countries' foods. Would you like to tell me about other countries' food? Thanks, let's start a trip thorugh the world's food!
Wednesday, August 3, 2011
Ridiculous Chain Writing~
One day, a little girl called, Selly, was walking thorugh a forest. She met a very cute fox sleeping on top of a fat bear. When Selly tried to look closely at the fox, it yawned and its horrible smell made her faint. So she decided to help to brush the fox's teeth by some tree leaves. Then suddenly, the it woke up and tried to pull out Selly's heart. The fox ate poor little girl's heart and changed its apperance as her. The fox went to Selly's house. It killed the girl's father, and became her father. Then the fox killed the girl's mother and became the girl's mother.
The fox wanted to rich, so he decided to kill Bill Gates. That time, Bill Gates was sitting by windows, talking with his friend Steven Jobs,who waseating an apple. The fox secretly came to Bill Gates' house. He killed both of the people and became rich by acting as Bill Gates.
The other "Bill Gates" told everything to his friends what he've been doing. Soon, there were no real people left in this world, except North Korean. It was because the smell of them were very bad. It smelled so bad becuase they never took a shower. The foxes didn't want to eat North Korean ,because he didn't want to be a smelly person. So those foxes began to hunt for other animals, instead of human. The killing did not stop forever......
The fox wanted to rich, so he decided to kill Bill Gates. That time, Bill Gates was sitting by windows, talking with his friend Steven Jobs,who waseating an apple. The fox secretly came to Bill Gates' house. He killed both of the people and became rich by acting as Bill Gates.
The other "Bill Gates" told everything to his friends what he've been doing. Soon, there were no real people left in this world, except North Korean. It was because the smell of them were very bad. It smelled so bad becuase they never took a shower. The foxes didn't want to eat North Korean ,because he didn't want to be a smelly person. So those foxes began to hunt for other animals, instead of human. The killing did not stop forever......
Tuesday, August 2, 2011
Skill Post
writing <skill post 1>
I am sure that if children want to go to English Camp, their parents will think very seriously which English camp is the best. They will mostly care on where do their children stay and the location of it. Also, they will think about what experience can their children get. There are three examples of English Camp. They are "Camp Big Apple", "Ranch West Camp", and "Head Start Splash". They all may have benefits, but to satisfy parents, they should send their child to "Ranch West Camp".
Those three camps seem very similar with each other. They all use several weeks to let the students to learn English. Also, they employes teachers with good skill. The camps lead the students to experience many different cultures and have a good memory. Although, these camps are similar, "Ranch West Camp" is the best choice.
When I have a choice to choose which camp I will go, I would like to choose "Ranch West Camp". The reason why I would choose it is because I think the place where I stay is very important. Contrasted with "Camp Big Apple", and "Head Start Splash", the place I'm going to stay when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much better. When I go to the "Camp Big Apple", I will stay in a dormitory. That will bring me many problems. They are problems with communicating, because I am going to use a same room with the children from other countries. For the "Head Start Splash", staying in a small apartment with family is not a good idea. It is such a small place to live for 5weeks. On the other hand, homestaying, which I am going to do when I go to "Ranch West Camp" is much safer than others.
The location of the place I'm going to stay is also important. The imformation about "Camp Big Apple" does not tell me the location of it. However, "Ranch West Camp" exactly tells me that the location is rural Canada. Even though "Head Start Splash" gives me that the location is Cebu Philippines, I would not like to go there. In Phlippine, many people use English, but they still have their own language. But, Canada is the native English country. This could affect me very much to learn English easier and faster.
The experience which I can make in the camp is very important as well as the location of the camp. Compared to "Camp Big Apple", "Head Start Splash", and "Ranch West Camp", I can make various experience. Despite of the similarity of the experience, I think I will make more memory when I go to "Ranch West Camp". It is because there are more activities I like in the camp. For example, I like hoseback riding, river rafting, hiking, canoeing, and mountain biking. I really like these because I did not have any chance to try most of these. I don't like the activities in other camps. Memory of trips to local museums, tickets to Broadway shows, and fishing are easy to make even though I don't go to those camps.
In conclusion, considering all above, the three reasons for the homestay, location, and the experience, I would like to choose the "Ranch West Camp". I think homestaying will make me comfortable, and also safe. As you know, the best way to learn speaking English is living in native English Country, for example, Canada. Alike the other camps, I can make many experiences, but there are more activity I would like to do, if I go to "Ranch West Camp". Despite many other benefits for "Big Apple Camp", and "Head Start Splash", I would like to go to "Ranch West Camp".
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